Other than that, it doesn't sound -too- awful, but generally I have this major problem with werewolves being evil when vampires are good. Vampires are corpses that leech human vitality and lifeblood to survive, usually (though not always) killing the victim. Werewolves are primal creatures pulsing (.... bad thought...) with their own life, who can survive on livestock instead and furthermore, can actually have sex, enjoy it, and PROCREATE from it.
As I say in the commentary I posted earlier... this only has relevance if you assume the above about vampires and werewolves.
My Great Wolves consume lifeforce, and prefer that of intelligent beings. They aren't anything like the normal fuzzy moon-triggered shapeshifters, though they're quite willing to play on other people's misperceptions of that. They are pure predators.
And most of my vampires are evil, cursed beings. The only good ones are, well, either not exactly what they appear to be, or working hard to stay away from the Suck Blood Of The Intelligent shtick.
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Other than that, it doesn't sound -too- awful, but generally I have this major problem with werewolves being evil when vampires are good. Vampires are corpses that leech human vitality and lifeblood to survive, usually (though not always) killing the victim. Werewolves are primal creatures pulsing (.... bad thought...) with their own life, who can survive on livestock instead and furthermore, can actually have sex, enjoy it, and PROCREATE from it.
As I say in the commentary I posted earlier... this only has relevance if you assume the above about vampires and werewolves.
My Great Wolves consume lifeforce, and prefer that of intelligent beings. They aren't anything like the normal fuzzy moon-triggered shapeshifters, though they're quite willing to play on other people's misperceptions of that. They are pure predators.
And most of my vampires are evil, cursed beings. The only good ones are, well, either not exactly what they appear to be, or working hard to stay away from the Suck Blood Of The Intelligent shtick.
Ryk E. Spoor
"Sea Wasp"
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